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Better than Xaio Xaio!

Or, more accurately, "Makes Xaio Xaio look like crap!"
I loved all the detail on the guns and vehicles!
Zhu has been dethroned!

One thing though:

The point of a parody is to make fun of something that's either cool and popular by exaggerating flaws. Runescape isn't cool or popular, and its flaws don't need to be exaggerated, they're big enough already. Next time, parody something that deserves to be parodied instead of a really bad MMORPG.

Lopaxe responds:

runescape is popular....

Good and Bad.

Good:

Not bad drawings

You tried hard and drew your guys instead of just spriting(shows you can do hard work)

Entertaining

I liked how you decided to do Neji vs. Sasuke instead of the majorly-overdone Naruto vs. Sasuke.

Bad:
The notice at the beginning. You're just trying to pander to the rampant stupidity that is found in spades here on Newgrounds.

The voice actors. Sasuke sounded like Napoleon Dynamite and Neji's voice was inaudible. Thank God for subtitles.

The drawings were a little wonky. I suggest the pencil tool, and working harder to merge FbF and tweening together.

Not good or bad:

It doesn't matter that Sasuke's Sharingan had too many points for the time period, or the technical limitations of being unable to withstand a Chidori even at close range. If this were a serious movie that was supposed to have story and meaning, then all that would matter, but since this movie's a simple quickie fighty scene, it doesn't matter how many stuff gets wrong. And the guys who are getting upset with all the mistakes are those kinds of morons who take even the littlest Flash movie way too seriously and probably have no life other than the Internet and who haven't had time to fully mature both mentally and physically. So don't let them get you down, just ignore them and blow the whistle on them and their abusive reviews. Heck, more whistle points for me and for you!

Wow.

This was your first Flash? Holy sh!t! You have serious potential, most first flashes on NG aren't of this caliber. I just saw SGGM2 and thought, "if you continue to improve on your graphics every time and make a boatload of sequels, you could get your own series!"
Good luck with SGGM3!

Kim-Kim responds:

Thanks... Supa Go-Go Man 3 is coming soon, with improved graphics XD Mwahaha *shuts up*

I love those real men of genius commercials!

And I love that peanut butta jelly time guy!

I'm not blamming it because it's CC.

I like a lot of CC stuff. But the Flash showed some allright stuff, then it just stopped. The music was still playing, but the screen was blank. Then it ended and returned to the play screen. If you're going to do something, finish it.

Needs a play button.

Other than that, it was ROFL funny. And I didn't see any spelling errors, so you didn't really have to worry about that.

Lots of stuff on existence and life! Yay!

Thanks for voting, amateuranimator10!
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You gave this entry a 3!
If this movie is protected you will get a PROTECTION point!

Straight-10's so I don't end up on RP3!

Look at my pre-Random Pointless Battles flashes, there's enough abusive reviews in there for 2 more episodes! Keep making fun of those abusive reviewers, and soon enough they'll just stop because they'll realize how much assholes they are and will go home a rethink their life, I hope. It is our shared dream to see a much better, happier, nicer Newgrounds. This is going straight to my favorites.

Good, needs improvement.

Allright, this was good. I liked it. However, there needs to be some work.
1. Maybe make a prequel on "The Fall of the Moon Clan" so we can get the whole story.
2. The fight scene wasn't very dynamic, try using more variety in the way the characters fight and try better tweening or frame-by-frame.
3. In my opinion, the movie dropped off after the first fightscene, for the end, you could have had a "There he is! That stupid monkey!" and a fight, just to catch everyone's attention. Like a teacher of mine said, the end should be a big impact to keep your audience hooked, and if it isn't, you have lost your audience.

reojionline responds:

Thanks for your constructive comment.if there is a next time,I will make a prequel? any way about the fight scene,
may be next time I`ll add more animation and more scene which is not repetitive any way thanks a lot

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