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Wow.

The texture and lineart on this piece is amazing, and all the detail really shows well. The detail and rough chalky texture really give this piece a powerful, raw emotional feel to it. The only thing that bothers me is that the size of her neck makes it look like she has a goiter...it's a little bit distracting.

Nice work.

Once again, you've got a good cartoony style and a great idea, and in this picture the Terminator endoskeleton and Arnold Schwarzenegger are particularly well-drawn and detailed. Your caricatures here are well-done, although it seems to me that everyone else in the picture looks a little flat and lacking detail, compared to the Terminator and Arnie.

Kind of a mixed bag.

The cartoony style isn't half-bad, it reminds me of something I'd see in the comics section of the newspaper, but it's a mixed bag here. On the one hand, i think you drew Doctor Manhattan and the Comedian well. And Nite Owl looks well done, too (I especially like the duck inner tube floatie). On the other hand, Silk Spectre's face looks a bit poorly-constructed and Ozymandias is showing quite a considerable gut considering how he's the strongest and smartest man in the world.

Still, funny concept and a nice cartoony art style, it just needs a bit more refinement.

Wow.

The sheer level of detail on this thing is absolutely incredible. There doesn't seem to be any problems with the picture...it's just perfect.

Not too shabby.

I like the linework and coloring on this piece very much, and the pose is very well done. But there's one thing bothering me,and it's that her breasts just don't look right, not at all. They look...wrong. They look like they would if a pervert had drawn them...not that I'm making any accusations. But still, at least it's not Rob Liefeld anatomy, and apart from that little bit this piece is very well done.

ScorpianX0 responds:

lols... I glad you found something to criticize me for, but what you told me really doesn't do me any favors making them better in the future XD.

but I'm glad you liked it overrall, Thank you ^^

I like the cartoonish design.

I do like the cartoonish design you have here, but there are some things you can improve on.

Your shading seems to be all over the place. Where exactly is the light source for this picture? The placement of your shading seems completely arbitrary. And if this is just a simple little cartoon, you might even be able to get away with foregoing shading altogether and leaving things flat.

One thing you might want to try is using thinner lines. While a lot of cartoons do use thick outlines, the thick outlines are only on the outer edge of the cartoon, and the inside details are made up of far skinnier lines. Look at the character design of "The Fairly Oddparents" for example. It make the cartoon look a lot cleaner and a lot less muddled.

Nice work.

This looks very clean and crisp, very sharply detailed. The anatomy looks exaggerated while still realistic, rather than some ridiculous disproportionate musculature out of a Rob Liefeld comic.

The parts in red look somewhat unnecessary, though, and while they don't exactly hurt the image's effect, it might be better to get rid of them.

ts3ts3 responds:

thanks for you thoughts! I like using red, but i guess i can over do it sometimes.

It's a good start.

You've got a good start here, especially with the head, but with the body it seems you lost all sense of proportion compared to the head. A simple rule of thumb is that the chest is the length of two heads and the entire body is around eight heads tall--if I remember my ninth grade art lessons very well, that should be right.

If you look up some anatomy stuff and went back to the drawing board on this it would be much better!

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