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[Dual Swords]

Good, needs improvement.

Allright, this was good. I liked it. However, there needs to be some work.
1. Maybe make a prequel on "The Fall of the Moon Clan" so we can get the whole story.
2. The fight scene wasn't very dynamic, try using more variety in the way the characters fight and try better tweening or frame-by-frame.
3. In my opinion, the movie dropped off after the first fightscene, for the end, you could have had a "There he is! That stupid monkey!" and a fight, just to catch everyone's attention. Like a teacher of mine said, the end should be a big impact to keep your audience hooked, and if it isn't, you have lost your audience.

reojionline responds:

Thanks for your constructive comment.if there is a next time,I will make a prequel? any way about the fight scene,
may be next time I`ll add more animation and more scene which is not repetitive any way thanks a lot

[SW: SCA:J.E.T -Trailer]

Excellent!

You know, you're supposed to submit trailers to NG Alphas. However, because of the immense quality and awesomeness of this trailer, I'll make an exception! The Jedi Elite Team reminds me a bit of the A-team. And I'm glad that you know your SW. Lots of people don't know all about the Star Wars expanded universe series, and when they make SW cartoons...all canon continuity is thrown out of the window. ^_^

Xennethy responds:

I do have a trailer submitted to the Alphas. But as u can see, this trailer does not only include scenes from the movie. Therefore it can be a standalone movie, rather than only a trailer.

[Toad's 2nd Demension Demo]

No. No.

You don't submit demos or trailers to the Portal. You submit them to Alphas. Get better voice acting next time because you don't make a very good voice actor. Don't have sound that ceases to exist 3/4 through the movie, everyone hates that. Nice violence, though. The completed project might not be a piece of crap.

FaceBiteDotCom responds:

I submitted it here because you cant submit anything to the alphas without having a movie past judgement at the portal

[MAN 2: Naruto]

Uh..4 a naruto tribute..u got sum stuff wrong...

you did use what sounded like authentic music from the anime, so kudos to you. but aside from music and the hitai-ate headbands its not really a good tribute. the anmation was a bit simple(but who am I to talk) and it was overall too short and not funny enough. and barely anyone in naruto uses swords, besides gekko hayate, zabuza and orochimaru, they all primarily use kunai and shuriken. I just didn't realy like this.

Kyora-Mishiso responds:

It was.
I got it straight from the producers themselves!
Ok, that's not true, I hijacked it from Limewire, like most of that.
And yes, I know no one really uses swords, but I like them.

[Happy Halloween Collab]

I'm sorry, but this all-around sucked.

Every single artist here has absolutely no talent, you guys should see my tutorial, so your Flashes won't be such crap. I'm amazed that this passed judgment. I've created better stuff than this, and it all got blammed.

GunningSoul responds:

Man, sure I would like to find the Triforce of Power, legends says it taste like chicken.

[Transitions Episode 1]

I wish I could animate like that.

That was truly amazing, a delight to watch. I liked the part with Mace Windu. But, I'm not going to give away anything! Commander Cable and the fight scene was sweet. Nathan and Larry are pretty funny. What will happen next?

Brand-new-hero responds:

only time will tell...

[-Star wars in 30 seconds-]

eh.

This isn't as funny as the other "Star Wars in 30 Seconds" one, you know, he one with bad animation.(the crappy animation made it funny) Either this is a ripoff of the one by Kitmouse, or just another idea.

BlindxLink responds:

god how retarded are you people...

[Star Wars Aftermath]

hehehe

It was funny but you forgo that battle droids always say, "Roger roger" after everything they say. But it was still hilarious.

MeatwadSprite responds:

thankyou big times your the best

[Fury - Preview]

cooooooooooooooooool!

This is sweet. I just read the other reviews, and it seems I'm one of the few people who actually like that song.(I'm a big fan of Japanese-language songs-my favorite song is the Fullmetal Alchemist theme.) The animation was a awesome homage(cough-RIPOFF-cough) to Akira Toriyama, you must REALLY be into DBZ. Of your stick movies this was the BEST. Your other prieview was theme song material: hey, you could use it for the Fury theme song! YAAAAAH!

AkiraToriyamaJR responds:

Sorry took me so long to respond. thanks alot,i just showed people how much i was devoted to this animator and series. im finishing up maximum chakra 2, and trying to change fury a bit. time has pasted because of work lol but youll see them soon.

[Fury: Fight for the Earth]

Stop the previews anmd start the show!

I speak for everyone when I say to stop making cool previews and start making actual episodes! But it still was pretty good...but not as good as your other FURY preview!

AkiraToriyamaJR responds:

Well actually this was the movie lol. It was about 40-50 secs. i just didnt want to erase it. But i feel you on the previews. I can say this its been 2 years now and i havent sent anything in. But i am working on 4 movies together. So just wait a lil more cuase i have some effects youll go crazy for.