Whoa...
In the beginning, I feel like I'm being chased by misshapen demons from a non-Euclidean alternate dimension that want my soul, all the while doing shrooms. I still retain a bit of this feeling in the rest of the song, with the glitchy drums, but the organ, piano, and strings kind of give it a sadder or darker mood. Hmm...maybe it's raining while the demons are chasing me. The scream didn't fit in very well, you should have had it fade in while the instruments were fading out, oh, and it would have been cool if you had slightly glitched it up, screwed with it...
Well, there's my three cents. I'm giving you an extra cent because I'm feeling generous.