TheAmateurAnimator's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

["ZIP" - Part One]

Hilarious

When it ended I just thought "What the hell just happened?"

Then I burst out laughing.

I-WANNA-BITE-UR-FACE responds:

ROFL

[The Bloody Mary Tale]

Decent work.

There wasn't really anything majorly wrong with this Flash, but you could have improved on two things.
1. When the man is chanting Bloody Mary, you shouldn't have used the same sound clip over and over again, because doing that creates a monotonous and boring effect. It would have so much more emotional impact if you had an increased amount of tension as the chanting went on.
2. The music at the end was too upbeat. You should have just gone with my music all the way ;)

Nice job though. 4'd.

ThomSip responds:

thanks for the positive comment,

about the voice acting, your right I shouldn't made it loop and I just need a voice actor next time.

about the other song. you're probbably right, but when the credits begin my first completed flash animation was done. And that's why I wanted hapy music ;)

thanks for the scores as well :)

ps.
your song I used is sooo perfect for this :)

[Furry Fabbots: ep 7]

Excellent Shining parody.

"Who are you?"
"HITLER!!!!"

I love how these shorts of yours are so terribly animated and funny at the same time. Good work.

Mechabloby responds:

Your kind words of fortune please my beautiful singing voice. And cat. My cat sings. Just on Saturdays and for a laugh.

[The Deads Originals-5]

Nice.

It's pretty nice, I thought it was funny when the car DIDN'T hit the guy and the tree hit him instead. You could have made the guy screaming when his head was on fire, though. You probably could have been able to find sound clips of a guy screaming somewhere on the internet.

demoninabottle responds:

Thanks for the review.

[Super Gear Solid]

The reviewer behind me is wrong.

This was pretty good. Did you do the sprite editing yourself? I just have some things for you to improve:
1. More sound effects.
2. Easier-to-read subtitles in a more "eye-friendly" color.
3. A play button that isn't almost impossible to hit.
Overall, though, it was some "solid" work. Good luck on the sequel.

topcat13 responds:

Thanks for giving me some ideas of things to work on in the second one, i have never been very good with sound, but i will try to get more sound effects and such for the second

[Da Matrix downloaded]

Nice work.

I only have some complaints:

1. Voice acting sounded nothing like the original characters.

2. When there were the Agent Smiths, the word you are looking for is "assimilate," not "annihalate." Assimilate is to make an induvidual part of a whole(which is what the rogue program Smith does). Annihalate is to utterly destroy(like what the Death Star does to planets or monkeys banging on pots and pans does to a person's hearing).

Good parts:

1. Everything that was supposed to be funny was funny. The "cookie monologue" was the best, though. "WHAT IF I FAIL TO EAT THE COOKIE???!!!!"

RogerregoRRoger responds:

Righto, sorry for the mistakes. Just only seen 2 matrixc movies and only once, so im not much of a matrix nerd here.