TheAmateurAnimator's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Philosopher Phun Shorts]

Oh, Excellent!

I was laughing through the whole thing, as I have an interest in philosophy. I though the animation was very good, too, very clear and fluid. And it was not only funny, but informative!

Just one problem...it was too short! A few more sketches would have done it well, but I can understand that you had time constraints. Maybe a sequel should be made...

MasterLock responds:

Thanks, time constraints can be a pain!

["ZIP" - Part One]

Hilarious

When it ended I just thought "What the hell just happened?"

Then I burst out laughing.

I-WANNA-BITE-UR-FACE responds:

ROFL

[The Bloody Mary Tale]

Decent work.

There wasn't really anything majorly wrong with this Flash, but you could have improved on two things.
1. When the man is chanting Bloody Mary, you shouldn't have used the same sound clip over and over again, because doing that creates a monotonous and boring effect. It would have so much more emotional impact if you had an increased amount of tension as the chanting went on.
2. The music at the end was too upbeat. You should have just gone with my music all the way ;)

Nice job though. 4'd.

ThomSip responds:

thanks for the positive comment,

about the voice acting, your right I shouldn't made it loop and I just need a voice actor next time.

about the other song. you're probbably right, but when the credits begin my first completed flash animation was done. And that's why I wanted hapy music ;)

thanks for the scores as well :)

ps.
your song I used is sooo perfect for this :)

[Furry Fabbots: ep 7]

Excellent Shining parody.

"Who are you?"
"HITLER!!!!"

I love how these shorts of yours are so terribly animated and funny at the same time. Good work.

Mechabloby responds:

Your kind words of fortune please my beautiful singing voice. And cat. My cat sings. Just on Saturdays and for a laugh.

[Adolf Hitler: ATWI80D 78]

The end is near...

Well, it's Hitler's penultimate penultimate stop! Where will he be tomorrow, before triumphantly returning to Germany?

I have a suggestion for this masterfully done series. How about on the last episode, with our brave traveler back in Germany, you have a picture of him with all of the friends he met in his journeys drinking beer together? It would be an awesome way to conclude the series!

AfroUnderscoreStud responds:

It will just be a standard episode. College work prevents me from doing anything special.

[The Deads Originals-5]

Nice.

It's pretty nice, I thought it was funny when the car DIDN'T hit the guy and the tree hit him instead. You could have made the guy screaming when his head was on fire, though. You probably could have been able to find sound clips of a guy screaming somewhere on the internet.

demoninabottle responds:

Thanks for the review.

[Adolf Hitler: ATWI80D 37]

Okay.

Allright, now he's in DC. Personally, I think that the inflated stomach looks really fake, but I can't think of a more realistic way to do it in Photoshop. I still think that, in your future ATWI80Ds, you should blur the edges of each cutout in Photoshop so that the pictures blend together with each other better, then the picture would look less like flat images pasted on one another and more like Hitler's actually holding what's in his hand.

P.S. I had to give a low score for sound because, though the sound is good quality, it's getting annoying hearing it in every ATWI80D except the SEs.

P.P.S. You're a lawyer aren't you? I mean, you think logically(and more rationally than most other humans), you use loopholes from time to time(like when you told a reviewer why these submissions aren't rule violations), and you trap people using the law.

P.P.P.S. Why do you change your name every week?

AfroUnderscoreStud responds:

I sometimes do blur the things together, but only if I think it looks right.

No loopholes about it. These don't even come close to breaking a rule.

I like changing my name, that simple :P

[Adolf Hitler: ATWI80D 36]

Another good one.

The only constructive criticism I can really offer about this series is that you should use the blur or smudge tool to make the images blend together better in Photoshop.

PS. Man, Hitler gained a lot of weight.

AfroUnderscoreStud responds:

Blend what together?

[Super Gear Solid]

The reviewer behind me is wrong.

This was pretty good. Did you do the sprite editing yourself? I just have some things for you to improve:
1. More sound effects.
2. Easier-to-read subtitles in a more "eye-friendly" color.
3. A play button that isn't almost impossible to hit.
Overall, though, it was some "solid" work. Good luck on the sequel.

topcat13 responds:

Thanks for giving me some ideas of things to work on in the second one, i have never been very good with sound, but i will try to get more sound effects and such for the second

[Da Matrix downloaded]

Nice work.

I only have some complaints:

1. Voice acting sounded nothing like the original characters.

2. When there were the Agent Smiths, the word you are looking for is "assimilate," not "annihalate." Assimilate is to make an induvidual part of a whole(which is what the rogue program Smith does). Annihalate is to utterly destroy(like what the Death Star does to planets or monkeys banging on pots and pans does to a person's hearing).

Good parts:

1. Everything that was supposed to be funny was funny. The "cookie monologue" was the best, though. "WHAT IF I FAIL TO EAT THE COOKIE???!!!!"

RogerregoRRoger responds:

Righto, sorry for the mistakes. Just only seen 2 matrixc movies and only once, so im not much of a matrix nerd here.