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Nice.

It's pretty nice, I thought it was funny when the car DIDN'T hit the guy and the tree hit him instead. You could have made the guy screaming when his head was on fire, though. You probably could have been able to find sound clips of a guy screaming somewhere on the internet.

demoninabottle responds:

Thanks for the review.

Awesome.

This was pretty awesome. I love how the whole thing is subtly parodying DBZ's dialogue style and structure without being a real DBZ parody. The frame-by-frame effects were extremely well-done, but some fbf looked a tiny bit choppy, like when he was pulling the covers over his head.

One of my favorite parts was "Oh, great, now I have to go through 10 minutes of...ugh...morning." and then "If the house is messy, I will actually kill you when I return." I'm probably paraphrasing on both quotes. I have terrible memory.

The reviewer behind me is wrong.

This was pretty good. Did you do the sprite editing yourself? I just have some things for you to improve:
1. More sound effects.
2. Easier-to-read subtitles in a more "eye-friendly" color.
3. A play button that isn't almost impossible to hit.
Overall, though, it was some "solid" work. Good luck on the sequel.

topcat13 responds:

Thanks for giving me some ideas of things to work on in the second one, i have never been very good with sound, but i will try to get more sound effects and such for the second

Awesome!

Graphics: I think that the fluidity is on par with Brackenwood, and that the drawings themselves put most TV animes to shame.
Style: Never before has someone on Newgrounds captured the power of anime so well!
Sound: Please, pick up Fruity Loops and some good soundfonts and redo the music. MIDIs haven't sounded good for a long time.
Violence: Duh.
Interactivity: Next, replay, and, of course, our good friend play!
Humor: The bad guy looks funny.
Overall: A 9.5 rounds up to a 10. This is one of the best furry-related things I've seen on the website, which is cool. It shows that you aren't afraid of the teeming masses of furry-haters who automatically link "furry" with that "yiffy" or whatever, even though on your dA mainpage, you say you hate yiff-whatever the funk it is anyway!

Nice work.

I only have some complaints:

1. Voice acting sounded nothing like the original characters.

2. When there were the Agent Smiths, the word you are looking for is "assimilate," not "annihalate." Assimilate is to make an induvidual part of a whole(which is what the rogue program Smith does). Annihalate is to utterly destroy(like what the Death Star does to planets or monkeys banging on pots and pans does to a person's hearing).

Good parts:

1. Everything that was supposed to be funny was funny. The "cookie monologue" was the best, though. "WHAT IF I FAIL TO EAT THE COOKIE???!!!!"

RogerregoRRoger responds:

Righto, sorry for the mistakes. Just only seen 2 matrixc movies and only once, so im not much of a matrix nerd here.

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