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Great work!

The drawing and animation of the sticks was very well-done. However, it desperately needs sound effects and background music.

Awesome!

Great job with this. The tweening was so fluid...that's how I animate(in my dreams, that is)! Great job with the ending, I never saw it coming! Nice choice of music, too.

Great work!

I can't think of any complaints for this movie. Damn you and your perfectness!
One of my favorite parts was the last scene, with Sasuke and Orochimaru arriving at "Neverland Village." Now that you mention it, there is a frightening parallel between Orochimaru and Jackson. Very frightening indeed...

And, by the way, you can bypass cheap filler crap and move further ahead in the storyline by just reading the manga. Everyone knows that manga > anime on all levels(except coloring and the illusion of movement based on a series of images with small increments of change between images).

bumwolf responds:

Oh yeah I've been following the manga as well. Although Sasuke's reintroduction wasn't what I had envisioned but it's not my comic.

Good work.

It's pretty good work.
Good:

The graphics were nice

There were some funny parts, like with the spray-bottle repellent(Mace?)

Good sound-syncing

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Bad:

Your frame-by-frame could use a little work. As a previous reviewer of this movie said, don't make it so jerky. The drawings could also be made a bit smoother.

Overall, a 6/10, or "above average."

Great!

My breakdown:
Graphics: smoothly animated and well-done.
Style: Nicely done and, as I said, very smooth.
Sound: Okay music, not too good, but not too bad. Some sound effects would be greatly appreciated.
Violence: Fighting=violence. Even if there isn't any blood/gore.
Interactivity: Play button.
Humor: Chibis never fail to bring a smile to your face.
Overall: Not perfect, but awesome nonetheless!

Nice work!

Good:
Nice cartoony graphics.
Good job with the frame-by-frame.
Made me chuckle a few times, good job with the jokes.

Bad:
The intro text was way too long.
The intro text wasn't very well-made. Here's a better way to do it. First, use the font "Impact" for the opening crawl. After you've written the thing, select it and press ctrl+b(or apple+b if you have a Mac) twice. Next, select the transform tool, set it to "distort" and make the opening crawl look like it's smaller on top and larger on bottom. Convert the whole thing into a symbol and you've got a spiffy, ultrarealistic opening crawl.

I hope I could have been of some service! Apart from some problems, this was a great submission, it even looks front-page worthy!

zauriel responds:

it actually was made in flash 5....so distorting text isnt as simple as that....thanks for the advice though!!!

How true. About commies, that is.

They take your hard-earned money, your hard-earned stuff, your hard-earned job, all in the name of "equality." At least, in capitalism, you work for all your fancy stuff. Unless you're one of those rich heirs.

lol!

Now that was funny! The frame-by-frame was amazingly smooth! It was so random! The moonrocks part was like most Family Guy jokes: random things that go on so long that it spontaneously becomes funny. In short, everything was hilarious! I hope that you can continue it.

BrerSteve responds:

well this was sort of a spontaneous creation I started 2 days ago... so I have no plans to continue it at all.. I am making a series called Lost in Reality that I hope to finish... sometime... or ever.

One of the best SW movies!

One of my favorite parts was the end where the Jedi saw Mace flying out the window. My cousin actually though up a scene similar to that last year. It went like this:

Scene shows Padme looking out a window, thinking about Anakin. suddenly, Mace slams into the window and slides off.

It was pure comedic gold.

Some good, some bad.

Here's my breakdown on the movies here:
1. Crustclock's was very pointless, short, and boring. I did not like it at all.
2. Zerostar's was very funny, it was one of the wierdest parts of The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy. I loved it, though I didn't think that the music fit very well.
3. Moonclock's was terrible. Bad animation, really stupid going-on stuff, and it dragged on far too long. It ruined a lot of this submission's overall score points.
4. Cyberen's movie/game was rather pointless, to say the least. I could not find out what to do at all. A set of instructions on what to do would greatly benefit.
5. The explanation thing, in full Hitchhiker's Guide style, was brilliant and much better than most of the standalone movies put together. It captured the wit and nonsensical nature of the entire series.

Now, the whole breakdown.

Graphics: Some good, some bad. it averaged itself out.
Style: Each movie had its own style.
Sound: Is that music from the original 1980's TV version I hear? Congradulations!
Violence: A whale falling to its death IS rather violent...
Interactivity: A really spiffy preloader.
Humor: Zerostar's movie and the about section were the funniest thing. And they were very funny!
Overall: Average. Moonclock's movie was very unnecessary, and it brought down the whole movie's power. However, just when I was going to say, "Meh," I check the "about" section. Why couldn't the entire collection be of that quality?

cyberen responds:

the answer is there. You have to find the question yourself.

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